Friday, April 13, 2012

Our class story By Olivia

Our class story

   By Olivia     
                 
For the past couple of weeks we have been working on a class story that will be published by one of our classmate’s dad. It took a lot of hard work but it was worth it. Right now we are just about done with our final draft and all we need to do is vote on a title. Yesterday at the end of the day those who wanted to,  wrote on a piece of paper the title they wanted to have as the story. Now today Ms. Cosel is going to have all the titles up on the board these are some of the titles:
The portal ventures
What the?
 Journey to the mysterious island
       The adventure of Isabelle and Eli
The mysterious journey
The journey
This afternoon we drew and the one who had the most was The Journey.  After we drew we got straight to the editing. We made so many changes! Oh, I can’t believe I forgot to tell you about the story! So, there is a girl named Isabelle and a boy named Eli and they go on a crazy adventure. The first place is a different dimension, then in a person’s nose, and last the ocean. They meet lots of different cool creatures and they work together to achieve lots of goals and most importantly have fun. We all are going to get a copy of the book and we are doing the illustrations our self’s. It will hopefully be a great success and we are very thankful to our classmate’s dad. If he didn’t offer we wouldn’t have the opportunely to do this so thank you!... and good night or day which ever time you are reading this. 


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